Unit 27 An Interesting Story of Mine
为迎接高考,你常常复习功课到深夜。请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。
注意:日记必须包括所有图画的内容,可以适当增加细节,使日记连贯,要求100词左右。
“范文”
May, 10, Saturday Fine
The entrance exam① is coming. Recently② I have been going over lessons③ until late into night, preparing for④ the coming exam.
This morning when I woke up, it was already nine o’clock. I got up quickly and went out for school hurriedly⑤. When I saw my mother preparing for breakfast, I told her that I was going to be late for school⑥ and wouldn’t have breakfast . Then I rode on my bike in a hurry and headed for⑦ school fast.
To my great surprise, when I got to school, I only found that the school gate was locked firmly. I felt puzzled. After a while⑧, I suddenly realized that it was Saturday today and we needn’t come to school. What great fun⑨ it was!
“注释:”
①entrance exam:入学考试
②recently:adj. 最近, 近来
③go over one’s lessons:复习功课
④prepare for:准备……,为……做准备
⑤hurriedly:adv. 匆忙地,相当于in a hurry
⑥be late for school:上学迟到
⑦head for:朝……方向前进
⑧after a while: 过了一会儿
⑨great fun:很有趣的事
“点评:”
这是一篇根据图画内容展开的日记体记叙文。
本文图画内容贴近现实,贴近每个高三学生生活。尤其从2003年起,高考将提前一个月进行,广大考生都在努力拼搏,夜以继日,忘我地攻读,期望能取得佳绩。本文作者将发生在5月10日这一天的事情描绘得惟妙惟肖。善于运用长句是本文的一大特色,其中有包含并列谓语的简单句,如“I got up quickly and went out…”;有包含v-ing作状语的简单句,如“Recently I have been going over lessons…, preparing for the coming exam”;有复合句,如“When I saw…, I told her that…”;有并列复合句,如“After a while, I suddenly realized that it was Saturday today and we needn’t come to school”,这表明作者有较强的驾驭语言的能力。
全文结构清晰、紧凑,用词简单,句型多变,语言丰富、准确、生动。
资料来源:英语作文高分必背丛书:高考/李华田主编,武汉大学出版社,2005
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